The Devil doesn't prevent you from getting what you want; instead, he corrupts your goal so it turns out uglier than you wanted, or he puts a price on it.
For example: Want to overthrow the oppressive government?
Price: You can assassinate the dictator, but it's a suicide mission, and your best friend, or your wife, is the one who'll have to do it. And you'll have to give the order.
Corrupted: You overthrow the Tsar but the Communists take over the Revolution and now you have an even more oppressive dictatorship, which you are responsible for.
Saturday, September 21, 2013
Thursday, September 12, 2013
Plot Layers
There's more than one plot going on at a time.
- Objective: what's happening as seen from the outside
- Main character: what's happening from his point of view
- Subjective: the main character's growth and self-discovery
- Objective plot: the Rebel Alliance retrieves the Death Star specs, loses Alderaan but blows up the Death Star
- Main character: Luke starts as a farm boy and becomes a Rebel fighter pilot and hero
- Subjective: Luke learns about the Force and embraces his heritage as a Jedi.
The climax of Star Wars works in all three plots: “blow up Death Star” AND “become Rebel hero” AND “Turn off the targeting computer; use the Force, Luke”
Wednesday, July 10, 2013
What is Interesting About It?
When you have a cool story idea, you should stop and figure out "what makes it cool?"
Let's say your story is "Byzantines land in the New World"--what makes that cool? Partly it's the sense of wonder from discovering a new world--the new cultures, the new landscapes, the mysterious ruins, the dinosaurs. But why the Byzantines? Because you want to emphasize, not brute force, but cleverness, subtlety, making allies of the natives (which the Spanish did, but most people don't know that).
Let's say the story is about a modern man who can see the Hidden World. In that case, make sure there's plenty of Hidden World stuff to see.
A spy in the Napoleonic era? Pump up the James Bond-ness and the history.
Let's say your story is "Byzantines land in the New World"--what makes that cool? Partly it's the sense of wonder from discovering a new world--the new cultures, the new landscapes, the mysterious ruins, the dinosaurs. But why the Byzantines? Because you want to emphasize, not brute force, but cleverness, subtlety, making allies of the natives (which the Spanish did, but most people don't know that).
Let's say the story is about a modern man who can see the Hidden World. In that case, make sure there's plenty of Hidden World stuff to see.
A spy in the Napoleonic era? Pump up the James Bond-ness and the history.
Saturday, June 15, 2013
Shaman
The shamans wore elaborate costumes of paint and feathers and shells, but this was just an old man. His skin was leather. His right eye was dark and piercing, his left eye was empty, and from the ruined socket a wisp of smoke trailed upward. He wore nothing but a cord around his waist and rings of blue mud and white mud daubed on his left arm. He carried a flint-headed spear.
Sunday, May 26, 2013
Plotting Tools
Snippets from Million Dollar Outlines:
- Timebomb: a time limit that seems realistic, puts extreme stress on the character, and has devastating consequences for failure.
- Dilemma: the character must choose between two (or more) unpleasant options, and deal with the consequences of his choice. The choice usually happens early in the story to allow time for the consequences.
- Crucible: a setting, condition, or relationship which forces characters to stay together despite rising tension between them. The setting might be that they're snowbound in a wilderness cabin, or on a small vessel between ports; a relationship might be with family members, co-religionists, or fellow soldiers; a condition might be that they both have the same disease, or are being hunted by the same mafia or detective. It may not be impossible to leave, but the cost will be high.
- Reversal: one character is winning, when suddenly his opponent snatches victory from defeat. Early in the story, a reversal usually goes against the protagonist, making it harder for him to win next time. However, it could go against the villain, who had the hero on the ropes, only to be thwarted by a lucky shot; he withdraws, vowing to come back and crush the hero next time. At the end of the story, the hero often accomplishes a reversal to finally overthrow the bad guy.
- Revelations: an explanation for why a character feels and behaves the way he does.. The character may make the explanation himself, or another character may tell it, or it may be something deduced.
Sunday, April 21, 2013
How to Tell if a Character is Important
Taken from Million Dollar Outline:
- Viewpoint for the narrative
- Named
- Powerful enough to change the outcome of the story
- Shown as suffering extreme pain, especially emotional pain
- Extremely likable
- Shown as struggling to do the right thing
Essence vs Identity
Million Dollar Outlines quotes Michael Hauge as saying "he has never seen a movie or read a book that worked where "the question of the protagonist's identity" doesn't com up. In short, questions like 'Who am I?', 'What am I?', and 'Why am I this way?' are at the core of every great work."
From another source, I heard this note from a Hauge seminar: In the beginning of most successful films, you see the protagonist in his everyday Identity, just fitting in, going about their regular life. Wesley (Princess Bride) is a farm boy; Korben Dallas (Fifth Element is a cab driver; Thomas Anderson (Matrix) is a programmer; James Edwards (Men in Black) is a cop. And then something happens--they meet someone, or learn something, which speaks to his Essence. At that point, the protagonist has to make a decision: is he going to hide within his Identity, or show his Essence? The Identity is safe, but unfulfilled; the Essence is unsafe, but fulfilled.
What conflicts arise because the protagonist, or other characters, doubt him, and what must he do to prove he is worthy to hold the role he must take?
From another source, I heard this note from a Hauge seminar: In the beginning of most successful films, you see the protagonist in his everyday Identity, just fitting in, going about their regular life. Wesley (Princess Bride) is a farm boy; Korben Dallas (Fifth Element is a cab driver; Thomas Anderson (Matrix) is a programmer; James Edwards (Men in Black) is a cop. And then something happens--they meet someone, or learn something, which speaks to his Essence. At that point, the protagonist has to make a decision: is he going to hide within his Identity, or show his Essence? The Identity is safe, but unfulfilled; the Essence is unsafe, but fulfilled.
What conflicts arise because the protagonist, or other characters, doubt him, and what must he do to prove he is worthy to hold the role he must take?
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