Wednesday, August 18, 2010
Free writing
For free writing exercises, I'll be taking a few random words, or a sentence. and just typing for ten minutes. Don't have to have an idea where it's going, just write.
Free writing: bed, rock, elephant
Suddenly it was light, and loud. Daytime. Urgh. I was going to need a megadose of caffeine to cope with today. Shouldn't have stayed up till 4 am again. Awfully loud, and kinda open air feeling. Should be dark, quiet, should be still asleep. I pried my eyes open to look for the clock and see who'd opened my curtain. What I say was an elephant about to drop a rock on me. Big elephant. Big rock. I rolled aside, getting tangled in the mosquito netting—where'd that come from? The rock dropped and smashed my bed. Whoever's bed this was, anyway. Where am I? Elephant has small ears, pretty sure that means it's Indian not African. No mahout. I'm staying still and the elephant is not trying to trample me, very important point. I'll keep staying still. Some kind of bamboo hut with woven grass panels for the walls, no glass in the windows, jungle-covered hill outside, old stone palace or temple or something half covered by jungle. The elephant trunk sweeps half the wall away, then he ambles off and starts pulling up grass. I slowly sit up, carefully watching the elephant. It doesn't respond. If it comes after me, well, an elephant can outrun a man who's in good shape, it can certainly outrun me. They can't make sharp....right turns? Left turns? Don't recall. Better not to attract its attention.
Sunday, August 15, 2010
Free writing: barrel, purest, drive
"No, Captain Jones, the Portuguese are neutrals! We can't attack the enemy while they're in a neutral harbor."
Jones said, "It's Commodore, Captain. And if you recall, the English had no qualms about attacking us at Santa Rosa when that was a neutral harbor. And it's purest whimsy to think they wouldn't do it again, if they saw advantage. Yes, they'll sent complaints to Court, and letters will swim round the oceans after us, and I may be reprimanded. But if we let this convoy through, they'll land troops and drive on Capetown and station frigates there. Our trade with the Indies will be cut in half—if we're lucky! Your family is wealthy, Captain. Tell me, can they stand it if they have to buy spices by the barrel from Englishmen at the same prices they paid for a tonne around the Cape? Will they pay the insurance rates for merchantmen? Who will buy your linens and silks when they cost triple or more what they do today? And will your family thank you because your delicate sensibility, your nice observation of a law the enemy flouts, made you forego this opportunity? You may indeed bear a public reprimand, in a year or two, when the queries are made; but will your King and your Navy and your merchant boards not know who saved them?"
Friday, August 13, 2010
Free writing
He hadn't closed the curtains, so he woke at first light. The sky to the west was overcast, grey fluffy clouds with pink edges. Something red and swift flashed past the window--a cardinal, presumably. He sat up, gathered himself, and stood with a cacophony of pops from his joints. He was used to his ankles and knees protesting the morning, but of late his back and ribs were adding their own percussion.
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